Lucid

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 20-Feb-2007 9:27:23

Every night I hold you
the world just seems so right
To this day I can't believe
that this woman in my arms is mine.

It's like a cross between 2 dreams
to watch the sun rise dance across your face.
Just knowing that you're there to wipe the tears
stops them before they seep out

What twist of fate was it
that brought our 2 sould together?
Did the gods just mercifully smile upon us?
Or did nature make some mistake?
Is this all true? Or are we deluded.

Could this heart beating in tune with mine
truly be in love with me
Or is it another illusion

One of natures cruelest tricks.
If so then all of this joy, all of this heaven
would be just another fleeting dream.

But if I'm dreaming let me sleep
let me spend 5 more minutes,
a blissful 5 more minutes, like this.
Because once I wake
If I wake
I know I'll never love again
Because a love like this can never be repeated
and you don't return to a dream like this.

Post 2 by Farzana (Veteran Zoner) on Tuesday, 20-Feb-2007 14:02:26

let me spend 5 more minutes,
a blissful 5 more minutes, like this.

completely happy Peaceful 5 minutes. rare, very rare in our life. Always load, work, family, stress and stress.
Thanks a banch for whole posting.

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 21-Feb-2007 9:31:48

It's ok

Post 4 by Emerald-Hourglass (Account disabled) on Friday, 23-Feb-2007 7:54:13

I'm confused, i thought you didn't believe in god..and who would have known you had any feelings anyways, like this especially. Why do i find it hard to believe that anyone loves you that much..anyways, lates

Post 5 by dream lady (move over school!) on Saturday, 24-Feb-2007 14:10:37

Oh, Goblin, that's beautiful. You are so talented. Love your style. dl

Post 6 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Wednesday, 28-Feb-2007 7:47:50

BG. I wasn't referring to your christian excuse to absolve the human race of their sins, but Pagan gods, the very 1st religion of Celtic britain.

And I am very much loved up can you say the same?

Dream Lady thanks it's growing on me..smile

Post 7 by Emerald-Hourglass (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 28-Feb-2007 20:00:42

actually yes i can..he's probably as messed up as you are so...yeah

Post 8 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Friday, 02-Mar-2007 8:02:23

He? No... your wrong again how often is that now

Post 9 by Musical Ambition (I've got the gold prolific poster award, now is there a gold cup for me?) on Friday, 02-Mar-2007 11:17:58

I like this. You get a sense of deep emotion when you read it. Good job.

Post 10 by Emerald-Hourglass (Account disabled) on Friday, 02-Mar-2007 18:44:15

or she..whatever